Varosverse Stories 2

Well right now I'm rewriting all my old ones. So....Right now I only have this one. I'm rewriting Tyton War and I'm writing a Stickyman Comic, Ice Age Comic and Akhil and I are working on a crossover comic. So the only comic available is Star Storms and Earth Omega

@Mop you make your own comics?

More like stories but yeah. I make Superhero Stories for my universe. I have one down there called Star Storms and Earth Omega

@Mop I like on stories there always has to be a super sick name. You know. Like (Mr mxyzptlk)

Well could this work? On Tyton War there's Zoltan , Zoltaire and Zoltar. Those wicked enough? If not I got Gha'Driel and Hexkor. Thurber Uxedres also named The Fire Damon etc etc XD

Does anyone want to read it?

I read it. It was good.

Finally! Jesus I thought no one read it. So like those other perfectionists what was good about it?

The plot pulled me in and there was great character development (especially for Fire Damon). I also liked how you incorporated the pictures. While they weren't that important, they really spiced up the story and I encourage you to keep adding them.

Thanks . If I were to practice my drawing skills I could actually draw pictures. I thought I would try something new since I haven't added a story since August

@DarkProdigy your thoughts?

I'll read it when I'm not tired.
I can barely read a comment how am I supposed to read that?
No for real I will read it tomorrow

Sorry if I keep annoying with asking this but are your eyes less blurry XD?

Hey @Dellmamy you'll read the new story?

No I haven't got the chance to. Is it finish?

Yeah almost 2 weeks now

Where can I read it?

The document ⬇️

Also if you want to use Princess Aqua and her evil twin sister Lusty Heat you can.

Cool they can make a cameo . Thanks!