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Trojan War - Rise Of Petrinos

Created by TheNemianLion, 3 y 4 mo 1 d ago.

The chronicles of the New God Of War

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TheNemianLion
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What y'all think so far?
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Soulcollecter57
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Well that's one way to show you were victorious after a fight. (Super critic mode engaged) the beginning was a rather slow, and around the time Ares was gathering his army it escalated faster than one would like, the only real suggestion I could give is work on the pacing and keep the pacing steady it fluctuates a little too much, but overall it was pretty good, about a 7.5 as of right now.
TheNemianLion
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Thank you very much for your feedback!
Soulcollecter57
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No prob.
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Deep into the confines of Mount Olympus, Ares' castle, a dark tower with red and browns covering this temple, inside was the god of war himself, conspiring with his allies in the Trojan war that they've been fighting for some time now, his two general's,
First, Artemis, the goddess of the hunt a trimmed and toned woman with a Silver breastplate and Blue and Silver armoured leggings, equipped with her signature Godbow, with it she could send out a variety of extremely powerful arrows, she also had a hunting knife and shield.
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Then, Apollo, the God of the sun, Clad with Red silk clothing and golden armour, with his Golden Chariot, he had the ability of Godlike Pyrokenesis, he could also manipulate energy, move faster than light, massively faster than light with his Chariot and has extreme levels of Strength.
And of course, the Kingpin, Ares, a god of incredibly high caliber, rival in terms of power to the Big Three and Hercules, he wore a black and red full body armour, even covering his face, he had a massive physique, which helped him tower even more than Apollo and Artemis, who were both around 6 foot, Artemis at 5 foot 9, Apollo at 6 ft2, Ares... Well he had to be at LEAST 6ft 8.
Ares' wields a battle axe, at least 4 feet in length, it's name is Regicide, used to execute kings, his most powerful weapon, it was harnessed from a piece of Zeus' lightning bolt pulled out of a Black Hole after decades, it was pure dark energy and anti matter before it was solidified by Ares stealing Hephaestus secret ore, Tonormium, a metal that could absorb sound, light, energy or force as well as being far denser than say Uranium, and far sharper than Obsidian.
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The three of them were standing over a large bench in a dark hexagon shaped rocky room with weapons and relics everywhere, on the timber rocky bench, battle plans were conscripted on paper.
Ares' proclaimed "I've called this meeting for an obvious reason, that's to win the war, at whatever cost, my first step in this game of chess would be to take Athen's, dear sister's pride and joy"
Apollo interjected "It isn't that easy to just "take" Athens" Apollo said sarcastically before being choked by the god of war "YOU DARE DOUBT ME!?" Apollo engulfed his aim full of fire and aimed it at Ares
"Boys! Boys! I know your testosterone is pulling the strings, but we're on the same side, so calm yourselves the hell down!" Artemis injected
Ares's aggressively glared over to Artemis before he released Apollo as Apollo extinguished the fire of his arm.
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"So how is this plan going to do down oh great leader?" Apollo questioned Ares
Ares just smirked plainly before replying "We take advantage of distractions, there's tournaments taking place in the arena of Athens, investing all their attention, we could simply enter through the front door unnoticed, my sister's plan will be her downfall!
"And how do you know that this event isn't some form of bait?" Artemis commented
"She's to desperate, we've already taken so much ground, this tournament is something she needs to invest in if she ever wants to stand a chance against us, first Athens then... Hmm... Egypt... Norway... We'll cross that bridge when we're ready.
"This will be our ticket to ruling Olympus! When we win the war, Zeus couldn't possibly defeat the three of us! He stands no chance!" Apollo declares before laughing
"Artemis... Apollo... Alert the troops..." Ares finished before smirking with evil intent and putting his helmet over his dark hair and red eyes.
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As the light of the sun glazes over Greece, Athens, birds were chirping as rays from the scorching Greek sun were warming the earth, not a cloud in the sky, Athens was a very rich city, with beautiful marble sandstone buildings were lined up, food, ore, water, all in abundance.
Legions of soldiers were lined up in a training formation in a colosseum, the great city of Athens was a homage to the Goddess Athena, temples in abundance, statues plenty, sand flowing through the air as horses were neighing, swords and spears were clanking as the citizen's talking amongst themselves.
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When the legionnaire signalled the training of their troops, the horns of war were sounded as the great infamous Greek soldiers got into a spar, troopers who possessed the spirits of warriors were training against one another for physical and mental gain.
All was going as was planned by the authorities until a deafening explosion was set off at the full front of the city, the Trojans were attacking, not only were they attacking.
They were accompanied by Artemis, Apollo and ARES!
Both of them was led by the war god himself!; ARES!
With an extremely powerful force of assault Ares and his kin burst into the city of Athens and left a pool of blood in their wake mauling and eviscerating their enemies really without much struggle.
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"I haven't come here for you to surrender your city, I've come to kill you all, then take it from your hands, understand there is nothing you can do, so it is appreciated if you just don't retaliate, thank you" Ares commanded with his declarative statement.
Unfortunately for the god of war, the calvary would had arrived in the form of the god on the side of the Greeks.
Athena, a beautiful Godess, Perfectly built, not slim, not overly muscular, she looked like an guardian angel primarily white amour with gold on it, duel wielding golden swords, forged by Hephaestus, it is said these swords could tear through realms if given enough force behind them.
"Halt, Ares! You will leave this city or you will feel my wrath! either you leave without conquering Athens, or you leave without your head" Athena smirks before continuing "Your choice... Brother"
Ares just laughed at her attempts to be threatening, he had already made it into the inside, he knew a fight wouldn't benefit Athena, but it would Ares, because while Athena used to be only slightly less powerful than Ares, through the Trojan War, the gap has opened up further in Ares favour.
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She proceeded to burst through the sea of Trojans dropping them one by one like flies slicing through them as energy pulsates through her swords, this tactic is really just trying to intimidate Ares attacking at blinding speeds she eventually got to Ares.
Poseidon, the 7 foot Sea God with Aqua and Navy Armour and robes, a being with Godlike strength and control over the sea was duking it out with Apollo as the class of Water and Fire was awoken, blazing inferno clashing with overwhelming tempest.
Hera was a beautiful Goddess, with Red and Pink robes and armour, Hera was battling Artemis, Artemis, in a battle of skill, endurance and wits.
Athena attacked Ares at blinding speed kicking him across the face sending him protected back miles away, she then followed up by attempting to decapitate the God of War with her twin blades, but was blocked by Regicide, she was pushed back by his sheer power hundreds of meters into the air.
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They took the battle to the skies as energy pulsated from their weapons, Athena landed a strike to Ares eye removing it, Ares in a fit of rage slammed the bottom of his battleaxe, Regicide into the ribcage of Athena, forcing her to let out a gasp of air.
Ares then swung the side of Regicide into the face of Athena sending her rocketing to the down as she created a huge crater in the ground, soon as Athena regained herself she was struck by white noise and blurred vision as she saw destruction in her city as her legion was fighting Ares'... And losing...
Poseidon and Apollo were still duking it out, Apollo was using his speed to use quick but hard attacks but Poseidon was just too powerful, he caught Apollo mid air and pulled him into a stiff strike to the gut of the sun god
Poseidon summoned his trident and was about to decapitate Apollo before Ares through Regicide into the back of Poseidon weakening him vastly, but not killing him, Apollo released everything he had into blasting Poseidon into Kingdom come sending Poseidon into the Ocean hundreds of meters away unconscious.
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Hera was putting up a semi decent fight but she was clearly outclassed here, she just wasn't as combat experienced as Artemis, unfortunately for her Artemis put 12 arrows through the head of Hera before stabbing her in the back of her neck and finishing the job by ripping her head off with her shield.
Athena was the only one left standing to fight, she turned her attention to Artemis who she quickly overpowered and stabbed her many times which forced her to be on the defensive, Apollo intervened blasting Athena in the back, but Athena threw her spear through Apollo which almost killed him, he fainted.
Athena was feeling pretty confident about herself after just beating two gods but... Ares still stands, she rocketed towards the god of war, however, Ares caught Athena by her throat, he chuckles as his fearsome gaze engulfed her spirit, she felt fear... Death, even.
"You're mine you hypocritical whore! Mark my words! I'll have my way with you, and leave you for dead! Among your kin, DEAD! I TELL YOU!" Ares commanded as with a powerful uppercut, broke Athena's ribs as she gasps desperately.
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Ares commanded as he slowly beat her to a pulp, throwing her through pillars, breaking limb by limb where he eventually committed a crime so evil it put a frown on the face of Hades himself.
Ares breaking Athena's body wanted to break her spirit, he raped Athena viciously before choking her slowly, he had his way with Athena and left her, left her in her own city with the mountain of her own soldier's dead bodies, she had lost this battle.