New Diss Track

Second Response -

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GjjeWEEwSBT7U-eiP1qAcImQU-n3_QH-1jtgbjjEGyo/edit?usp=sharing

Unlike MOP, I can actually say I destroyed him.

Part 1, 6/10, repetition through out, but not anywhere near as much. The flow felt a little off, I'm sure it is much smoother in person, but being read, the flow is hard to feel. That Logan Paul line made me chuckle a little so you get extra credit points, on to part 2.

Part 2- 10/10, God damn. The really personal lines hit hard, the chorus was tight, a little long winded, but still dope. That Ben 10, and Kevin 11 line was smooth. It's a no contest to be honest.

Holy ****! Did NOT expect a 10/10, part 1 I totally agree with, it really was a warm up to get me in the mood, I always need warm ups before I demolish, that's why I need to be in solitary confinement before rap battles irl, for the second track, I did snap a bit and I was expecting a 8/10, MAYBE a 9/10, a 10/10 means so much, thank you homie!

A disclaimer though, the tracks we got from MOP, for his standards, were amazing, the best he has ever done and he's improved, I really think we should acknowledge that, the fact he got me to write a 10/10 track, really deserves recognition, so well done Kevin.

I recognized that, I'm gonna be bringing it up, don't worry! ;)

Dude I think I destroyed you in part 2. I'll be surprised if you come back from that . How did you know where I was inspired from?

Because I listen to Eminem, my dude... Destroyed... Hmmmm... I don't know... XD

Cracked?

Also the second one was inspired by a Tech Nine song. You like him?

Tech nine is dope, but you only seem to write decent songs with someone else's influence.

You bit the Speedom verse

I wouldn't say cracked, I enjoyed reading your diss, you didn't hurt me, you actually made me proud, so... If anything you added to my armour instead of cracking it.

DAAAMN! That was really good my G! Smiling the whole time I read that! Props to you, now, Imma hit you with the comma, then the full stop.

5/10, lots of repetition in the lines used, most of which are factually incorrect, but I won't fault you on that, most rappers lie, it's whatever. The only reason anyone would want to sue you is because your lines are plagiarized, anyway it was a solid attempt, I'll grade @Nemian's next.

I rated it a 9/10 for Mop's standards and a 4/10 for mine, but a 6/10 in general.

Not bad, killshot huh?

7.5/10 for your standards, 3/10 for mine, 5/10 in general.